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There are some audio problems in this, My computer was freaking out and screwing up (it still is) so try to be lenient with that, but regardless, I hope you like it.
good, not bad so far.
little rusty here and there,other than that, it was good.
Again Good Effort but you should add more animations and mabey make the next one longer
i have to say thoe i do look forward to the rest of them
ps i would make the font a little bigger next time 'round
Not A Bad Effort
This wasn't a bad flash, although it did need some improvement. The audio was, for the most part, fine, but in the scene right after Bowser was released, you needed more dramatic, darker music. What you used, at least to me, didn't quite fit in with what the mood should have been. Next, the dialogue balloons don't need to hold the arrows to the next line of dialogue. You should put one button somewhere on the bottom, some what out of the way, so the viewer isn't constantly clicking all over the animation. Also, the dialogue itself seemed a little trite to me, and it seemed that maybe a lot, if not most or all, of it was thought up as you went along. A little more planning might be needed for the next one. It was a decent start for this series, and not a bad storyline along with it.
my head herts from the music
next time make a mute butten.
I thought I was the only one who used jet force gemini music in flash!!
lol well the storyline was alright but the animation needs a little more work. overall very nice
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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