Score: 8

"like it"

by: LXAstudios

date: May 26, 2008

i do claymation too, and i have done it for more then a year(since i was twelve) so im pretty experienced at it. the claymation was a lil bad but better then min for a while so it still pretty good, but i like how you added a flash guy into it. pretty nice. i will give you 8 stars. *hands over 8 stars*
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LXA Studios

Score: 5

"Let down by your claymation."

by: Burntleaf

date: March 27, 2006

Im sorry but i found that hard to watch. Looking at these other reviews i feel that the other people have not watched many other claymations. The characters were lumpy, boring, one colour, effortless blobs of clay with attempted arms and legs and a head that has been slammed against your desk a few times. Some bits were choppy, and worst of all FOCUS YOUR CAMERA! The picture quality made my eyes water it was so bad, turn the saturation on your camera up too, lots of colour was lost so it became drab and boring. The background moved a few times too, and the animation was very simple and quite unexciting.

However, the (only) good bit of that was the flash which i see you tried very hard on. I liked the focusing in and out effect which you used to blend it in with the poor quality out of focus background, and the reflection in the Psp.

In conclusion, i think you should practise claymation a lot more, and use some better programs. Your camera seems to be a webcam, and not a very good one at that. If you want to enter something like this into newgrounds, spend a bit of money, sacrifice your birthday present for a camcorder or something that will make better picture quality. Also the sound was bad quality, and you used greenday (yeah thats an opinion but i hate it), and to make it worse it sounded like you recorded the greenday, making it fuzzy and sounding a lot lesser quality. And your voice was quite high, but there's always audacity, to make your voice lower.

I can see you put a lot of effort into this, and i applaud you for that, but leave claymation for now, you seem talented enough at flash- you can move onto claymation at a more experienced level.

Burntleaf

Score: 2

"This movie was realy boring."

by: scebiscool

date: March 27, 2006

This movie was so boring I couldnt watch all off it. A tip for You Would to have more of a story line and clearer voices.

Score: 10

"Shazzam!"

by: OrigamiNugget

date: March 26, 2006

pat yourself on the shoulder, you did a phenomenal job. If everyone put this much effort into thier 'toons, there would be no blams. I'm not saying it was perfect, but it was as close to it as could be. I loved the idea and the effects were fantastic, (also congratulations on being the first claymator to use more than just your own voice. Either that or you can do different voices. I don't know which, but congratz anyways) I just hate the Green Day in it. I would never let that affect your score of course, music is what you make of it, to each his own. Make more of these, probably. lol

Score: 8

"bahah mitch, your hilarious."

by: Breein

date: March 26, 2006

this was QUITE entertaining my friend. you seem to work pretty hard on your flash animations and i'm glad that you made it on here.

Good'ay