it has potential
i dont think this is the worst thing ive seen on new grounds, it makes me think of a beginner in flash, when i see it. it had some humour, and the animation was ok, id say in your next few flash movies try drawing a bit more of the characters, and work on the sound a bit, this wreaks of potential flash talent.. i know that your others will only be that much better with practice.
i look forward to your next submissions.