The Ninja Penguin by SuperTom



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'ParagonX9 - Chaoz Survivor'

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Submitted: 03/18/2006 | 06:29PM EST

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Genre: Informative

Current Score: 3.65 / 5.00

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Hello there, this is my third proper flash creation, personally i think it's an improvement, but i know i still have a long way to go.

Firstly, sorry for the rushed parts, working on this was a bitch, and if i work on it anymore, i'll die.

In theory, this could develop into a series, muchly depending on what you guys think of it. I've got plenty of ideas that can be put into pratice, and basic storyline, but i'd rather leave this how it is and get some feedback before going all-out on another. All reviews will be replied too, aslong as they are not overly offensive. >=(

I'd started this before noticing the idea had already been thought up, so credit to MinimaN and his series based on Ninja Penguins. :) which kicks ass, check it out.

Finally Enjoy! (if you die of boredom during the movie, i will not take responsibility.)

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Average Score: 7.6 / 10

Score: 9
7thkiller

"pretty good"

date: July 9, 2008

just one thing idnt get was when he ran to the button to release the animals he passed it by a couple feet then pressed it

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Score: 10
BloodxNxChains

">.>"

date: July 8, 2008

Hmmm it seems like you like your P90s xD Anyway that was pretty cool. Nice explosions lol.

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Score: 8
XwaynecoltX

"I liked it"

date: May 16, 2008

I liked this it had alot going for it, good characters. nice animation, abit of story some action, and some entertainment value aswell, the size was abit much maybe cut it down just a tad, other then that its cool.

Big but entertaining.

~X~

May 17, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks man, thanks for watching, it's been ages since this flash got a viewing lol, mind if i ask how you stumbled accross it? Thanks again or your review.

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Score: 7
stuvi-man

"PRETTY COOL!"

date: May 16, 2007

by the way, in your reply you can tell me to fuck off as much as you want because im not a flash master (i dont even have flash yet.)

i thought it was really cool and i could see youd taken a million years on it so even though action was a bit strange i wanna say nice one, especially seeing as how its your third flash.

Author's Response:

heheh wow, if i had spent a million years on it then i wouldv'e told ya to fuck off, but the action bit was rushed so you have all the right to say it was strange. :) I just got bored of making it, and didn't fancey drawing any more :p.

Cheers for your review.

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Score: 6
tdoom

"Umm geez.."

by: tdoom
date: May 6, 2007

My my you've actually made a cartoon that got me to write a review for once.

I like the idea i guess. I mean.. A ninja penguin! Lol, where do you come up with these kind of things?

Ofcourse i got a few points of improvement:
1. Too slow.. I think it's been pointed out in previous reviews, the action is too slow paced, and the entire "oh no it's comming right at me" cutscenes that last for like 10 seconds reminded me of pokemon. And NO that is NOT a good thing!

2. Add more twists. It was a very predictable storyline, very cliche no offense.

3. Yeah ummm i really do wonder.. How the hell is it the guy/penguin/ninja owns (what seems to be) a red lamborgini and an airplane, both probably valuing hundreds of thousands, if not millions, just to blow them up while landing on Antartica?
I mean COME ON!
Fix that.. Please.. It hurt my soul in a deep touchy place.

Other than that i must say, with some practice, new storyline ideas and another fresh submission (mixed with coffee ofcourse!) i'd say you'll turn out to be a fine flash-artist.
Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Can't say i'm a fan of coffee but thanks for you're review. I know what you mean about the action scenes, i'd pretty much given up on the flash by the time I got to that section, so saying they were rushed would be a bit of an understatment.

I like the penguin having all that stuff, thought it gave him a bigger back story perhaps, but oh well, can't be to everyones taste.

Anyway, good and thought provoking review, nice one.

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