Score: 10

"where"

by: bartlover3

date: May 24, 2008

where did you get that song before the credits where he was struggling to fly ?????????????????????????????????????
????????????????????????????????

Score: 9

"that was funny"

by: jack111111

date: March 16, 2008

i like it

Score: 10

"Hey Mna!!"

by: MartyOwner

date: January 28, 2008

What Program are u using

Score: 9

"Interesting..."

by: Kirbytchi45

date: December 30, 2006

Well, you can definitely tell that's your first flash. Animation wasn't bad though, but you could improve a teensy-weensy bit.
9 out of 10

Score: 8

"meh"

by: LOZelda64

date: October 1, 2006

Well, the movie wasn't so good. I know this was your first flash, so I guess I can raise my score a bit. But for future flashes, make the animation faster and smoother, cut out the choppiness. Second, make your jokes and puns clearer to understand. Just because you know what the pun is, doesn't mean anybody else can get it right off the bat. Like, with the "Pipe" scene, well, that just left me wondering what the hell had happened and why. Plus, putting in some language might raise the funny bar. So yah. Basically no choppiness, make jokes clearer (no matter how much work you have to do to clear it up, cuz if you aren't clearin' the jokes up because it's too much work, well then don't do the joke at all) and make everything understandable.