Not too shabby :p

This was actually quite good. I liked how you could control the text. Sometimes people put it in so it goes automatically but then it goes too fast and is hard to read. The animation was minimalistic but well thought out. Like others have said, the plot could use a little more developing, but otherwise I think you did well with what you had going already. Keep working hard, dude!

Humorous.

It was quite funny. Especially when Espio was talking about the pet he had that squeaked when he touched it's belly. The breeding by dancing was classic. The only thing I would recomend is the change of font, it was sometimes often hard to read. Overall, good job.

Ketsueki Baka,
F-KREW Swordsman.

Ok, but some major problems...

I will admit i haven't watched episode 1 and 2 but just watching this I found some major problems you should work on:
1) Get rid of the random german. It doesn't make any freaking sense.
2) Triple check for spelling and grammar errors. There were quite a few. If you have to copy paste your text into microsoft word, do it.
3) Some of the characters didn't makelogical decisions. Deciding to tell a very long story when you are rushing to save your friend wouldn't be something I'd do. Also walking off to get resources because you are bored with your friend being knocked out on the beach isn't a very good idea either.
Overall it was ok, but the above things need to be fixed.

Its OK

Short but Interesting; it needs more details.
Good Work!
KEEP IT UP! XD

Carlos Espinoza
(Xx_VGMaster_xX)

I don't see why it's popular

The story sucks, Theres shitty animated fights, a bunch of tweens thrown together, I just can't see what's so good about it

<3
Pirate