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Crebe episode three, full of action. Tell me if any bugs are there. HOLY CRAP I FORGOT A LINK TO THE SC. If you would like to be a part of us, here.
Not too shabby :p
This was actually quite good. I liked how you could control the text. Sometimes people put it in so it goes automatically but then it goes too fast and is hard to read. The animation was minimalistic but well thought out. Like others have said, the plot could use a little more developing, but otherwise I think you did well with what you had going already. Keep working hard, dude!
It was quite funny. Especially when Espio was talking about the pet he had that squeaked when he touched it's belly. The breeding by dancing was classic. The only thing I would recomend is the change of font, it was sometimes often hard to read. Overall, good job.
Ok, but some major problems...
I will admit i haven't watched episode 1 and 2 but just watching this I found some major problems you should work on:
1) Get rid of the random german. It doesn't make any freaking sense.
2) Triple check for spelling and grammar errors. There were quite a few. If you have to copy paste your text into microsoft word, do it.
3) Some of the characters didn't makelogical decisions. Deciding to tell a very long story when you are rushing to save your friend wouldn't be something I'd do. Also walking off to get resources because you are bored with your friend being knocked out on the beach isn't a very good idea either.
Overall it was ok, but the above things need to be fixed.
lol, yeah, i geuss i wouldnt walk off if im running low on foodon a deserted planet, when i havent eaten for days.
Short but Interesting; it needs more details.
KEEP IT UP! XD
thank you for the reveiw.
Hey man nice submission
I love the sprite work, it was well done. I also love the fact that your pro-audio portal! great to see a movie this quality promoting that keep it up!
the audio portal is the greatest idea scince sliced bread. I beleive that someone using your audio is like me getting a reveiw, thanks.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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