it was oksy
the animations good for a first time! and as you mentioned work on the voice overall well done tbh 7/10
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Well this is my first flash animation.. First of all I know the voices suck..and the reason is I'm using Windows "Sound recorder" with a pair of old ipod headphones jammed into my mic socket..acting like a very crappy Mic haha..and yes you can use headphones as a mic..weird huh? anyways enjoy this short flash film about Nim the Schizophrenic Cat!
Off to a great start
I'de just like to start off by saying, usually someones first animation isn't the best, but you really seem to have a great concept. As you already know your only downfall seems to be your voice audio. The animation was good, and the artwork was excellent and the background audio was suitable for this animation.
Overall great job.
If you can't seem to find another mic, try either speaking further away from the headphones (experimenting with distance always seems to work for me), or simply add subtitles.
Hope to see your next creation
Venom_Reaper
Soob-tytlays?
Nice artwork, I liked it... a suggestion, however- if you don't get access to a real microphone, in the future, could you add subtitles? I could barely understand the voices.
Nice.
Okay, as you mentioned in your introduction, the voices need work. Get a (real) microphone, and I can see this becoming a pretty good series of shorts.
If this should get blammed, don't be put off - there are a lot of morons here who will try to nuke an animation for the smallest reason, just to add to their blam points. I hope that you use this animation as a learning experience and submit more in the future; you obviously have the talent for it, so it would be a shame if you were put off by a bad score on this first try.
Either way, you got my protection point....less-than-perfect sound doesn't detract anything from the fact that this was good stuff. Keep at it dude. :)
Sorry
Next time work better on the speaking part,i haven't understand a word that the charachters said...
