I liked it
A pretty good effort for a flash film, quite enjoyable..
Where the hell does everyone get that music from??
Author Comments
*** Please leave reviews... I enjoy reading them, and I respond to every one.
This is a little frame-by-frame short that I did about a kid who is pestered by the teacher's pet, until he finally gets vengeance... by taking the "high road." Good ol' Hammurabi.
This flash has a unique style, since it is supposed to look like a doodle in school; the background is like a piece of lined paper in a notebook.
Music by David Firth (a.k.a. Doki), which you can download in the Audio Portal.
hmmmmm.....
It was ok.......
Very Good
A very good cartoon, it wasn't full of filth and pointless violence. Keep up the good work.
Pointless...
But I like the effects.
tricolor responds:
Thanks. But how does one define a "point?"
Great.
Wow I really liked this one.
You were funny this time.
The graphics were great too. This was your best work by far.
I liked the sound too. It tied together with what was going on.
In this case I don't think this flash would've looked as good with color since I guess it was supposed to look like doodles on looseleaf in class.
Was one of the people supposed be you in this?
_Notorious
tricolor responds:
i appreciate this encouraging critique. yes, i'm supposed to be the forty-year-old teacher. i really identify with her. nah, i guess we're all the protagonist (or so we think).
