Score: 6

"ok.."

by: murve33

date: October 16, 2006

Compared to spitball, this is crap. I think the point was a little weak, and the drawing wasn't good. But your drawing skill have improved, so i cant really tell you anything that dont already know.

Keep making toons as good as spitball.

And more locust toybox always makes me happy

Score: 4

"Needs a lot of work."

by: 0peth

date: July 12, 2006

The graphics were as a basic as possible and extremely sketchy.

And the colors weren't meshed at all. You need to work on your color scheme.

I liked the idea of this which is why I gave it a 2/5 but the way it was done didn't have enough effort for anything close to a 3/5.

The movement and flow was really screwed up too.

The sound I liked but I think you might have wanted to choose a more classic newgrounds audio.

For a beginning flash it's good.

The style of your drawing seemed to stay the same in your flashes.

I'm sure you'll probaly end up deleting this because your going to get really good at flash.

Anyway I'm going to go check out and review your other flashes. :)

Later,

_Notorious.

Score: 8

"Pretty good public service announcement"

by: snazzypadgett

date: April 8, 2006

Well done. I don't really get the first part, but it's cool. An overall satisying clip.

-That rock looks like an...

Score: 10

"fiver for the umm ahhh.... miser?"

by: Dylan-the-Star

date: March 19, 2006

yay this is like the hum of my refrigerator, which is somehow related to a thing that they used to call "music"

Score: 8

"What an ingenious way to self-advertise your music"

by: Kirizzle

date: March 14, 2006

I respect this flash simply because it advertises the audio portal in general, the audio portal needs some more light shined on it and I'm glad you did this even though I know that the 100 people who may have viewed this, only 5 of them actually bothered to go check out the audio portal. I myself have known about NG for 5 years, been visiting it every here and then the past 2 years and I only discovered the audio portal about 6 months ago. The flash portal practically casts it's large shadow over the audio portal and hides it from the awareness of most people on this site =/

Anyways, graphic wise and stuff, it really wasn't that bad, and since you advertised the audio portal I'll give ya a 5!