pretty good
like others have said the music could imporve but you've acknolaged that fact already
i like the story idea and how shadow has been popping up
can't wait for the next one, hurry up
Author Comments
--Update--
Part III can be expected in the next week and a half hopefully. It will feature more adventure, less dialogue (still some obviously), more FF VI characters and more of Locke's new powers. A major part of the plot will be revealed in part V which can be expected sometime in May
WATCH PART I FIRST. After leaving South Figaro, Locke seeks out Edgar trying to explain what is happening to him. But who is Quen Celes? And who is following Locke?
Blahblahboy responds:
Many apologies man, the series ended a long time ago when my hard drive got wiped. I'm glad you liked it and hey, there's always the chance that I'll revive it at some point.
Much Better
Same old graphics, more than one place, muysic wasnt as annoying, DEATH, better extras, Locke *tee hee*
Blahblahboy responds:
Yeah, I've modified the graphics for part III (just character sprites) and updated the extras. Locke isn't funny!
A Bit too short again, but still good.
Well, the story seems to be developing, but it seemed a bit rushed in that, you might want to work on your script writting a bit, its good but could be better. Would also be nice it if was a bit longer, even if you are doing a series, more at a time would be nice. Anyway, I liked it.
Blahblahboy responds:
Thanks, the next one will be longer because I've got the basics of the story done in text and now I just need to add some points about it and in part V I'm going to reveal something which could change the characters lives.
Needs something more...
This one was much funnier and relaxed then the first, but I didn't think it was any better...
It wasn't much different then the first, just click to continue and read the text with very little action. You need more sound effects like when Rayne snatched Locke from the desert that would of been a great time to add a little godzilla noise yanno?
Anyway the animation was a little sketchy but not that bad, the humour was welcome and the storyline is still interesting but we want something different... something to set the 3rd apart from the previous two. 3/5.
Blahblahboy responds:
Thanks, I know I messed up the sounds (as well as the sprites). As for setting the 3rd one apart from the other two, just wait and see and you'll (hopefully) not be dissappointed.
Sooo cool.
Boring.
jpg bad, gif good.
Have you heard of 24 FPS?
Just a little short.
The text windows need to be replaced/modified.
Blahblahboy responds:
Yeah I know that it was short and I messed up the sprites but I'm happy with the text windows.