not so good...
A) not funny
B) sound wasnt to bad... just wasnt very enthusiastic...if u know what i mean
C)graphics need a bit more... oomph to them
D) needs to be longer....
that is why voted low
keep working on it youll get better
I wrote this story as a comic strip about 2 years ago. The full story consists of about 100 pages and animating the whole thing is my most current flash goal.
This is just the prelude and only includes the first 5 pages or so. I hope to have more longer episodes in the future. I wanted to keep the first one slightly shorter for any feedback. Suggestions for improvement on later episodes is greatly appreciated. Enjoi!
not so good...
A) not funny
B) sound wasnt to bad... just wasnt very enthusiastic...if u know what i mean
C)graphics need a bit more... oomph to them
D) needs to be longer....
that is why voted low
keep working on it youll get better
NO
NOT FUNNY that wasn't good it was too short and a stupid person isn't that funny unless done right at least it had sound instead of subtitles for the next one make the guy a little bit smarter.
nice
it's cute but over simplefied, isn't it? for an interlude, its too short, no tension arroused... let's se what's next...
Meh, is aight
Dunno why but it made me laugh
ummm..
Umm.. its okay.. i also wanna to turn my comic strip into flash movies.. mines sonic related tho.... but umm yeah.. just make things more exciting