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Submitted: 03/07/2006 | 02:35AM EST

File Info: Movie | 2.9 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 3.40 / 5.00

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I did all the drawings on the computer.This is the best I've ever done with a cartoon compared to my others. I hope you rate it well. It's about a Jewish man whose friend gets shot trying to escape a Nazi concentration camp.

Edit: I added a scene where you see the german shooter.

Edit: Another cartoon won't be out for a while now.

P.S. Forget the chapter 1 thing. I'm not going to even make another chapter.

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Average Score: 6.6 / 10

Score: 9
LoverOfTehBush

"Woah Touching"

date: August 12, 2006

Very cool flash with meaning (touchs my hears cause im german) id love to see another 1 very awesome looking forward to more of your flashs

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Score: 8
Molestargazer

"Wow."

date: July 19, 2006

I've never been so moved by a flash. Yes, the characters were a bit 2D, but that's not too much of a problem. I didn't see the part where he tried to escape - or had that already happened?
Anyway, I congratulate you. Thanks also to MilkMan_Dan for the music.

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Score: 10
MilkMan-Dan

"Perfect"

date: March 9, 2006

It is very rewarding to have my music put to such a moving flash. I mourn deeply for the victims of the holocaust, and to see that you used your skills (which aren't that bad my friend) and my music... is touching and wonderful. I felt chills watching this movie... something that song has never done for me before, so it was truly powerful for me. Keep up the great work and thankyou for using my music.

MilkMan_Dan

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review MilkMan_Dan!

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Score: 6
LogicExiled

"Great plot but.."

date: March 7, 2006

You need to work on character proportions. One of the parts that sticks out most to me is when the main character is walking outside past the German guard. (Was that a building in the background, if so it needs to be much larger) The guard should have been larger than the main character since he was closer to the camera's point of view. Also, the scene with the sleeping quarters needs redone, it looks nothing like the rest of the video in a bad way. Too 2D. Try redoing this flash, it'll get a much better rating if you do. Try some shading, as well! : )

Author's Response:

Thanks for your constructive criticism. I'll keep what you said in mind.

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Score: 8
XxRabbitxX

"Cool"

date: March 7, 2006

Wow, great movie, badly drawn e.g when they were sleeping they turned 2D, i have no idea how to fix this but you should use a shadow or something. Keep working on it and it'll be great ;)

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