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Hello there! its been a while!
This is based of course on the real tale from the grims.
but I've twisted it a bit, in a... negative way?
I was inspired by "Jin Roh" if you've seen that movie, you'll know what I'm talking about.
well just enjoy it!
great story with a lovely twist, but you made the movie far to heavy, i had to set it to low quality and i still had trouble at times.
This flash is amazing. The graphics are very impressive, and it was one of the few flashes I've seen that actually made me want to watch and finish it. It was original, well written, and overall amazing. I do have to agree with the last replier when he asked what the point of the metal corset was. I think I may have an idea, but it didnt really matter, this was still great...5/5
Speechless is the first thing that comes to mind.
The second is how unbelievably unique, and impressive your flash is.
There is nothing I can really find wrong or remotely bad about this flash, save one detail.
I did not see how the metal corset and the story of her uncle fit into the story at all.....
Otherwise, this is goin in my favorites pile, and you get my favorite word for sweet flash:
Just one thing I don't get. What's with the metal corset? That does not fit in the story sideways with two bulls pulling it...
You have great skill in animating, but the story is really weak and bland. The quality of the narrorating voice wasn't too good. Could have been a difference voice too. And it would have been better if you rhymed now and then. But though the story was pretty bland and meaningless the end was superb. It's really what saved the whole flash. My advice is to consult some friends before making a flash for a better storyline. You have great talent for animation and it must have taken alot of work to do this. A tad bit better story and it would have been perfect. Did I mention the end was awesome? Sorry for any grammatical errors or spelling errors I'm a bit drunk. I hope this made sense.
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