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Mar 6, 2006 | 7:57 PM EST
  • Daily Feature March 7, 2006
  • Weekly 3rd Place March 8, 2006

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**3/7/06** my 6th daily feature and front page, thanks!

-i am myself a FOREIGNER, and am not trying to promote AMERICAN standards. but im sure you have a sense of humor and know how to laugh at yourself-
This is my 6th episode so far! Another wacky cartoon from the animator who brought you Final Fantasy Day Care, with the potential of becoming a series! A group of kids open a stand to sell water and make a quick buck, but the Soviets try to beat them. Can capitalism win once again? (i have no idea what im saying, so just enjoy!)

Note that this has mild Sexual Themes, but im sure you can handle it.

Reviews


satasltsataslt

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good

That was grate, i like the way you draw em.
KEEP IT UP MAN!



caleb-blackmorecaleb-blackmore

Rated 3 / 5 stars

good enough

Nicely done, drawings are good, animation is real nice, etc. Humor could use a little work though. I can tell you've got quite a bit of wit in you, but it is a little.....needing to be worked on. But yeah just do that and next time could be better, i see some potential in you. Also, i dunno why you went off on the whole "I got nothing agnist american" thing, made no sense, so you had soviets in here? so what?



ChrisBoredChrisBored

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice animation, however the script needs work

Like a lot of others have stated, the drawings are very solid. The animation is above average aswell, each scene looked great. However, like others have already mentioned, the script could have used a bit of work. The formula is very tired, and a lot of the jokes simply fell flat.

I am also a little confused about your replies to some of the other reviewers. You can't offend a large number of viewers, then try to defend yourself by saying "It's ok, I'm foreign too!". It is also very poor form to accuse the offended party of not having a sense of humour, without bringing your own valid points to their attention.

I know this was meant to be a satirical look at America, but surely even you can see how others could be offended. I would be very willing to overlook the offending comments if the satire itself was original or clever, but this is simply not the case. OK! Americans are self righteous, we get it!



hyperkid69hyperkid69

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

you did well.. but

it seems like you sorta ripped some family guy type jokes off, sorry to say. your graphics were good, but the voice acting was very poor. this was a good animation with good jokes, but one joke, the craig joke was quoted exactly from the simpsons. I think thats where you got the name craig, because it was from the scene where grampa simpson was off from the home for a while and a chinese guy from the retirement home was looking for him. Grampa said hello ping pong and the chinese guy said, my name is craig. Exact same line and the exact same joke. not only that, name was same. I'd have to say it was plagiarized, because there's no way that would have been a coincidence, maybe you didn't intend it, but you were probably thinking "where did i hear this before?" and put it in unintionally copying anything


DeuceNine responds:

actually, i didnt know that was from the simpsons. You may not hear this often, but i havent seen many simpsons episodes. But i do know the simpsons well enough to say that basically every cartoon is a ripoff of the simpsons (especially family guy) since the simpsons really HAVE done everything.


azncaramel69azncaramel69

Rated 4 / 5 stars

not too shabby

it seems like the cartoon was reminiscent of family guy. I liked it quite a bit. Spice up the characters' voices and it'll be much better. Great job and good humor.


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