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This movie follows the same formula as the Popcycle Quest movies , but this one is more action driven , please leave a review - i love reviews. Enjoy the movie.
it was pretty good!
Maybe add a little bit better sounds, to give it more life. When the guy got hit with the pipe, no noise indicating he got hit, and things like that help. Also, the story and dialogue is a bit terrible. Seems like everyone was a bit on the same page and not really individuals. That's just me, but then again I haven't put up a video yet, so take my critique as you would like to. I couldn't bare to watch it all, not because it was terrible, but just because I wanted to point those things out really fast and go to bed.
!!! Who the in the world is that guy!!!
You guys need some voice, the text just didn't carry my interest long enough. The fight scenes could use some tuning as well. Like instead of fading into black, it would have been more fun to battle the large (finale) group of enemies. Makes for better entertainment in my opinion. I understand it is difficult to animate, so i give you credit for that. Well done, but put some more time into it. Good luck on your next project!
A bit slow.
Im sorry to say that I found this flash a little tiring. Lots of reading, personally I would think speech bubbles would reduce the tear on the eyes (less looking away) also the blank screen for the last fight made the overal action seem lackluster.
In short I would like to see more movement and some added expressions (maybe custom sprites if ya got none) and then I would feel much better about whatching this flash.
A short film about a park bench
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