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This is the story of how the Jaredites from the Book of Mormon departed to the promised land. It was made with a Mormon audience in mind but could be enjoyable to others as well.
I appreciate any helpful feedback. If anyone cares to learn more about the Jaredites, there is a link at the end or you can just search Google.
((( GOOD STORY )))
Good start of a story keeps you entertained and nice looking characters decent backrounds and scenes, this is neat for its story, and some decent animating aswell...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit more detail in the "CHARACTERS" like different detail in the outfits,, for the most part you have dones well with this...
A funny flash with neat characters and a good story keep up the good work...
Well it was ok. Although slow and boring, the graphics were done well and it had an alright story to it. At the beginning when the guy in the desk was talking the lip syncing was pretty poor, but the rest of the lip syncing was good. Well nothing special but good job anyway =]
Thanks for the review. I have updated a couple of things such as making the teacher's mouth be in sync at the beginning. Thanks for the suggestions.
Mormons are satanic but they say the ybelieve in god, there are records of them being allied with the Thule Satanic Society wich lead Hitler to power
yeah this story really didnt intrest me at all, it was boring and humorless. (words of advise) Try finding god at the bottem of a bottle
Good to see another Mormon artist submitting on NG.
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