Score: 8
"Mm, interesting."
date: March 21, 2006
You do need to work on grammar, and puncuation, and run-on sentences...and a fragment of a sentence question I see, but I got through...Clay, here is an improvement or two that I could suggest:
(1) Put some checkpoints, or make it when you don't answer a question correctly, but keep going through the game to see your final score, like if I got 30 right.
30/50 answers correctly done.
(2) Put some more choices of music, like 5 choices, the one you have now, and some original music. Also, a mute button. Try songs like Simple and Clean, or go to the BBS and get votes on some songs.
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Other than that, it was great.
Author's Response:
Im making a sequal and trying to figure a way to do all that.
however i didnt even start it yet.
(cuz i dont know much about the AS)
Though i also and figuring how to make the questions appear at random.
I know i have to put them into a movie clip and....
well thats all i remember but i wrote it down somewhere.
any way thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff