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Feb 26, 2006 | 12:36 PM EST
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  • Ego City
    Ego City A kid named Johnny has to stop the destruction of his city.

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It's been awhile since I last submitted. Well this is my final episode and it all ends here X3 I want to thank everybody who supported me in the past to make this happen. & without a do, this show is at least 14mins long. Enjoy XD

Update: Sweetz 1st place and front page ^^ Thanx for all the respect and I also wanted to thank all the fans of my work along with the people who supported me and helped along the road to make this happen X3 Especially Tephy, my dear luv F3 and Thavidu of Phrozenflame.com for letting me host his site! In addition, I'll release a final encore on his site w/ added bonus so visit his site soon X3

Reviews


EsnEsn

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Long, confusing, and excellent.

This is the first episode of this series that I have seen - probably not a great way to start, considering that this is the final one. I often found the story and what was happening rather confusing, but I'll chalk that up to not watching the previous episodes and not downgrade you for it.

The sheer scope of this flash, however, is amazing. This thing is LONG. And I mean REALLY LONG - I thought it was going to end several times, but it just kept on going. It is also very well animated and choreagraphed.

I'll admit that your animation style isn't one of my favourites (it's a bit too angular for my liking), but you do an EXCELLENT job of animating your characters with a minimum number of frames in just the right places. I was very impressed by the graphics - the style, the colours, and how well you animated the fight scenes, camera pans, and all manner of other effects.

The music was also appropriately chosen. The one thing that brought this flash down was the quality of the voice-acting. The script isn't bad (although as a previous reviewer pointed out, the grammar is sketchy in places), but the delivery is cringe-worthy. If I were you I would've found people who could actually act somewhat well to record the voices. I could see that the voice-actors were trying to be good, but the majority of the time it ended up sounding unnatural and forced.

You should really consider a career in either directing or animation, because this flash was great. A tip for next time would be to maybe choose a more straightforward and easier-to-understand story line. I didn't mark you down for that, but I did have a (perhaps inaccurate) impression that this story might've been a little too complicated for its own good.



Tim-tomTim-tom

Rated 4 / 5 stars

awsome

kickin tunes



gamephreeck76gamephreeck76

Rated 5 / 5 stars

That was like watching an anime with good ratings!

I'm serious, it was like Dragon Ball GT/Final Fantasy 7/Final Fantasy 10/Tenshi Muyo/Armageddon: Crimson Iron shows!
Lol, nice job.
TWO REQUEST THOUGH: More blood, and slightly better acting.



Highriser1414Highriser1414

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dazzling

I dont know much about the EgoCity storyline and am new to this series. However I do know a remarkable flash when I see one. This episode is longer than an average flash but exploits several elements that kept me guessing and wide eyed. Although this flash is virtually flawless the one thing that stuck out to me was the complexity of the battle sequence. Most artist dream of the skill to incorporate that many details into a battle but I think you abused this aspect of the flash and it negated your other accomplishments within the episode. Overall my scoring speaks for itself good work.


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general-bloodlessgeneral-bloodless

Rated 5 / 5 stars

HOLY FREAKIN CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOTHINg i mean NOTHING to improve on. you have reached perfection