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dude this seriously sucks, you can't hear a god damn word they are saying and you can't seem to get a jist of the story, seriously sucked, sorry, even tho i don't do flash movies or anything so i can't really say anything but that really sucked, what the hell was the story about? no offence but it SUCKED BIG TIME!!!!!!!!! sorry if its harsh im not a nasty person. i dont like giving bad reviews. sorry. x
But do you have any idea what happened to clockcrew.net?
It's directing me to newgrounds!
awesome, by the way i wanna see a new phail!
I think that that idea of a Clock wanting to improve itself in animating is hiliarious, but actually have him go to Strawberry Clock and to go through everyday life is just hilarious. I loved the English/Clockish voice that the character had, it was definately original. Also, having things like "Want some sex?" and the weed came out of nowhere, and were great. I would however like the transitions between scenes be a tad bit more smooth. This is definately an interesting idea for a potential series, the two main characters surely have a lot of chemistry with eachother.
thanks for you constructive review,
i will try to make the transitions
more smooth too,
and actually the weed and the sex was a little thing made for people to think "what the hell is going on in his head!!!??" im glad you understood it
I didn't really like this too much. The graphics were kind of lack luster. Some of the scenes looked really rushed and really low quality. If your going to simulate a british accent in Speakonia, I would reccomend putting in subtitles since most voices were really hard to hear. The storyline wasn't too bad, but it was a little boring. There were a few funny parts, but you definitely need to add some more humor to the movie.
I really don't like these for many reasons. Whilst it may be smooth, the animation in this kind of flash is very limited and there is rarely much more happening than the eyes moving...and this is no exception.
And the content? Very imaginative..a flash about getting an idea for a flash.
Try making something more interesting.
O, and you might want to learn proper garmmar as well.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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