Score: 6
"here's a good review - Needs improvment"
date: March 3, 2006
first and formost... my spelling DOES need improvment(why dotn u get a job u goddam hippies) nahj/k lets see what my split ego can give to yeah for tips.
The lighting in the movie was mezmorizing to a point of attracting and raising our interest, uhm what else... The sounds were alright, but just lisen to what there saying, im not sure if ur 12or 13 but its the words from a 12 or 13 yr old reaching out to that small age groop catagory, and If you wanna hit it big, you gota tickle everyones spot.
Another thing, to short, too little information givin, I mean dumb girl's mom is a wizard, or that has some potential, say she's angerd and then a set chain of metamorphic abilities are released to her use of when she chooses.
Uhm what else avoid the pointless immaturity if your gona continue this series, dont use poop and dont use all your base jokes. Yep make a more interesting flash next time, and the most important question I can answer for you!! WHAT MAKES A FLASH INTERESTING?
they gota be walking and the screne has to be moving with them, then a sick beast with no control and has never been seen befor is then seen! eating the characters moms brains and holding there bodys, then the paladin FALLS TO THE GROUND SCREAMS NOOOO! and the lil wizard dumb chick is like OMG then has a seizur cus seeing all the blood and gore makes her sick then ANGRY but the beast has super +10 ultramatic superwizard armor on so her huge transformation doesnt work and so on and so fourth keep it up man!!
