LOL. I hit "random game" and found this, which I had already given 1 star to. Upon further examination, I reduced it by half a star. This was submitted unfinished.

Looking forward to the final result wasnt bad

This looks nice, I can't wait till you finish this.
5!

Total crap why did you post this?

The intro was okay. Apart fro that what the hell was the point of posting this? It's not a game or movie, it has nothing that makes it worth watching, isnt even a submission at all in fact. I mean all this is, is an idea for a gmae you had. The game dosent actually exist! But you thought you'd let everyone on NG know that you had an idea! Welld one, give yourself a hand! You had an idea! Amazing! I mean your brain must be tiny if it feels it needs to have a celebration every time it has an idea! WOW! But seriously this should've been blammed, all this is is a waste of people's time. And dont give me that "its only a preview cant people read!" crap. A preview displays portions of or is a demo or trailer for the submission. Not some text over an idea! I find it hard to believe that you actually thought anyone would care about this. I mean what kind of little child are you? Grow up for gods sake!

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dude if your'e submiting something ill give you a tip-FINISH IT FIRST