Score: 5
"Its ok"
date: February 13, 2006
While I understand that you want people to take into consideration that it isn't finished and there is another part which will make more sense, you also have to understand that we can only vote/review based on *this* submission, and will do so accordingly.
You really should have waited until you finished the other part, and submitted them as one. If its not finished, why submit it in the first place?
As for the movie, there wasn't really anything particularly fantastic about it. Movement was ok, and I got a mild chuckle, but that was about it. Also, I don't know if it was intentional, but there were about 3 typos that I caught in your text. Typos should not exist in short movies like this unless there is a LOT of text.
2/5