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EDIT: Just to let you guys know, this is an abandoned version of Sprawl. I'm currently (August, 2008) animating a relaunch.
Wow! Daily Feature and 60K+ views! Thanks for the support everyone and especially to those who gave good, honest reviews.
Episode One: Blocked Paths
Trapped in a ghost town, a man known only as The Traveler must fight for his life!
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man i love this animation. it's a very good in alot of ways. for instance the graphics were a really good style. just make the next one very soon or i will be very angry. :D
That was nice!Score: 9.2
The problem was well, it was kinda short
good start, too many inconsistencies
the story was adequate enough to support some good fight scenes (whcih is all you need for this). it was a bit bland and unoriginal, but not annoyingly so.
the graphics were quite nice for the most part. the character animations and the demon fighting the main guy in the town certainly worked well. however, the strange use of some textures (one big example being the stone passageway) did NOT work well. it just looked awkward with the otherwise cartoony graphics.also, the design of the town itself was very strange. a bunch of 3-window-long towers with absolutely nothing inside? it looked more like some ancient monument - which is what i originally thought it was supposed to be.
the worst part about this was the sound. the sound effects were questionably chosen and not mixed in well. the brake-screeching was annoying and didn't fit, as did other sound effects in the fight scene. the dialog was EXTREMELY bland and predictable, which ultimately makes the characters bland and uninteresting. the voice acting for the main character was good, but was very lacking with the demon and the ?girl? who was introduced later.
the action sequence was definately the highlight of this animation. perk up the graphics and do a big rehaul on dialog (maybe even find a friend who's a good writer, good dialog isn't easy to write). cleaning up the differetn aspects of this could really make for an inspiring series. also - i loved the style and design of the demon .
nice job on a good storyline. the graphics were good in their own way with excellent detail into it. what i would personally like in the next episode is some more fighting scenes but that is your choice :)
man this is great
great graphics the story is deep animation is awesome. ill be waiting for the next one. like your style
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