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EDIT: Just to let you guys know, this is an abandoned version of Sprawl. I'm currently (August, 2008) animating a relaunch.
Wow! Daily Feature and 60K+ views! Thanks for the support everyone and especially to those who gave good, honest reviews.
Episode One: Blocked Paths
Trapped in a ghost town, a man known only as The Traveler must fight for his life!
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Your sound effects were pretty poor, to be honest: that's something i noticed immediately. voices were fine, just walking/explosions, etc., didn't fit the bill. I wasn't too keen on your cartoon style for the character but you drew it well. Nice effort, but fix the sound effects!
Pretty amusing and unexpected.
Really nice job on this movie, the elements were all fairly strong, but absolutely shows room of even more possible improvement, explaining this is not very easy. The final product of all the elements coming together was very good, there was basically one thing in particular that brought it down a few points in which i will talk about later on. It is good to see a fight with lots of originality and with an actual story revolving around it. This i wasnt expecting because of the start of the movie, anyways here is my review.
The graphics were really great at some points, however at others they seemed almost experimental in a way. Firstly i havnt seen an animating style like that before, but it did always seemed refined, like the look to the tunnel itself, it didnt quite always fit in. Sometimes things were too simple to have any appeal too, such as the fish or backgrounds on occasion, the character looked really good, the detail in the stuff he was wearing was pretty good. I noticed your use of blur effects in the backgrounds, sometimes they werent quite used correctly and not quite in the right situations, but often they looked really good and accentuated everything you did right. The style was also pretty good, in fact it was probably my favourite thing about this movie for a few reasons. The fact that it was a fight scene, or at least the bulk of it was, would not be very appealing to me if that was all it was. But you added a good story behind the fight and you actually showed how it started in the first place, it also seemed a little more realistic:how the hero just didnt win right off the bat. The animating style was solid for the most part as well. The sound did have some lapses here and there, like sound effects seeming out of place by being stopped a little early. But the sound effects were great other than those times, the music choice was very good. But the voice acting was the big thing in this aspect. It was all very good, as im sure youve been told a few times before in the previous reviews, in particular the main character's voice. Near perfect expressions in his acting for sure.
Overall this was a great movie thanks to a well animated fight scene with a real reason for it happening in the movie. This has got me pretty impressed for sure, im excited to see how the future episodes turn out as well, dont keep us waiting too long!
-Two Thumbs Way Up! 4/5
i liked thsi flash alot. the charators are very strange looking but also have a sense of appeal to them. the voice acting was pretty damn good as were the rest of the sounds. only thing that made me kinda go "uhg.." was ya used that same explosion noise alot. but other than that that was great. keep it up
Wow that was an intense battle.
Definitely worth my 5's and going frontpage as well. Goodjob, looking forward to the next one.
Every once and a while a series emerges on NG that really puts other wannabes to shame. This is one such series. The sound quality was terrific, and the voice acting was actually good! (OMG) The animations was great, with some cool 3D effects that really put it over the top. I can really tell you know what you're doing, and I'm looking forward to future episodes! =)
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