Score: 6
"Decent idea, execution needs work."
date: March 30, 2006
My first immediate thought was that this was going to be a Foamy Rant-rip off. It kind of felt like you bookmarked it in the same structure as those damn NY's cartoons.
Animation was decent, but the guy screaming got to be obnoxious.
Writing needs work too. I'm all for cursing, but it should be used to eccentuate something instead of just being in there for the sake of just being a curse word. ("If you're a naughty bitch...") A lot of what the demon said felt kind of forced.
Shows potential, just needs to be polished.