I made this flashwork in inspiration of the story of the great free multiplayer online browser game, Pardus. Im really sorry about the cuality of the sound, I've had to lower it drastically due to the 5 meg limit. CONSTRUCTIVE comments are apreciated!
UPDATE--
Wow thanks everyone! I didnt expect anyone would like this! I'm slowly started on the second chapter, and I would like to know if anyone is interested in voiceing the story of pardus instead of you reading it! If you wish to apply, send me a pm or msg me to carlosmab100@hotmail.com !!!
Zealeous
Heh, good!
Just shows that humans will do almost anything to get better technology. This makes me regret i'm a Ska'ri on Pardus... Ah well. Music was exelent, i don't know why you said the quality of sound was bad. Also, i like the way you animated the characters.
Somehow....
It just didnt feel right, and had rip off bits..
Very nice
I was impressed by the length and that it kept my attention through it. However, I think it could be better presented at a faster pace or with better/more animation. Probably some of each.
Still, great job. I hope this does well so that more people see it.
thanks! the next chapter will be a lot more serious, this one was more of an experiment lol
good enough
the sound is good enought so is style
i would probably add a little humor(or a little more humor)
Original
I must say your flash is original because is like narration or documentary of something that would happen or actually happen. Sadly I wish you could make it more interesting like having voices and some really good action. Still decent job here.