This is still pretty sick all these years later.
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-This was all done in flash 5 with a mouse.-
Finally. After hard drive crashes, flash file corruptions, and having to start over from scratch, here's a rather short chapter in my series. This is loosely based on my other submission (so if you want a little more backstory, check it out). I've tweaked the story, added voices, changed some character designs etc. So in a way, this is a fresh start. At this point, the story probably won't make any sense, as this chapter was just to introduce the main characters. I assure you, in the next episode, a lot more will be explained. I've been working on this on and off since summer (mostly off since my computer died) and I put a lot of work into this, so please judge fairly. I would greatly appreciate it if I get lots of feedback! Enjoy, and turn your speakers up!
If you have any questions, I'll do my best to answer them!
-If you're not confident about your computer, then set the quality to medium or low
This had some great animation, but there was one major flaw. It was so small in terms of size! I don't know why you did that. Yeah, it was also pretty hard to understand. You know what? I don't care because it was so cool!
The voices were great too. They were all quite distinct. So were the character designs. This is certainly a series with potential. That's some really small writing at the beginning.
Really cool.
Now that was good. Really nice idea for a story line and it even had music from Ghost in the Shell.
Nice
Awesome submission, only thing to crique is that the resoultion is to low to read most of the titles and is difficult to watch on larger moniters. Also i would use Adobe Audition, or Acid to compose the audio mix, since the volume of the voices where all over the map, and it'll better match the Anime/Cinematic style of the animation. But overall an excelant piece!
good
awesome, good....great, waiting for more