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sketch--1

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After a couple of months of work, with the ending having to be changed 4 times, i think it is ready!!!!!

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A++++++++++++++++++

i like sketch 2 the best of all 3. A++++++++++.

Volatile-exp responds:

lol so do I, its funniest I think

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yeah go you

Volatile-exp responds:

no go you

welllllll

i liked it alot it was funny and why so many layers my top layers was like 7

Volatile-exp responds:

lol yeah i dunno how i managed the layers but i think i didnt understand movieclips then and i just attacked everything with motion tween

crap...

that was the most nonsensical plot ever, and whats more, you need to make better art

Volatile-exp responds:

lol I agree!!! but at least it got a snigger out of you

Suggestions

The drawing at the beginning needs to be faster. It'd also look pretty cool if it could go at a more natural rate instead of everything being drawn at the same speed. The graphics overall were not pleasing to the eye...a little more time on them could improve it. Try smoother lines and thicker ones. You should also give the stick a little personality or something (it looked like it at the beginning but then lost it) instead of just having him bounce around the screen.

Volatile-exp responds:

ye, i think i should put it at a beter frame rate for my future sketch's's's's's ty anyway

Credits & Info

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2,998
Votes
19
Score
3.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 29, 2006
11:41 AM EST