nice, man

Very cool sound fit your artistic graphics well. I do wish there was a bit more to it. But you pack a lot of punch into something short. The problem with doing anything out of the ordinary in Flash is that it in danger of looking like dominant-culture formulaics stuck into a kid's program with no genuine feeling. But this has a genuine ring to it. Thanks for stretching the NG repertoire a bit.

u r a fuckin faggot

oooh the world has violenc e boo fuckidy hoo life sucks for u beacuse ur a nerd and have no friends ur life will amount to nothin u will never get laid with a that attidtude the sign at the start wut the fuck! do the right choices phhhhbbfttttttttt yah tlike a sign or a flash portal will make a difference! i agree with u there is too much voilence but theres nothing u can do. NOTHING!

u are able to come up with some kickass graphics use those to make a story! if it owns it will be on the front. make a story bout a n assasin that gets wuts coming to him if ur agiasnt voilence but dont make a poem!

nice

it was cool. just keep in mind that newgrounds is not only violence and mayhem as you say.

Meaningful

That's a great way to put poetry and a message into flash.

Nice try

Well where do I start. One it just took way to long just to get four paragraphs on this flash. Plus you could have givin it alittle more time to feel and understand what you wrote. Was going to start all over and read it again. But forgot how long it took just to get to that area.

Two the music was annoying. Since you keep repeating the same beat.

Most of all there is half and half in this area. Not all of this material is of death and sex. But nice try.