UPDATE- 5th place!! That is awesome! The responses that I'm getting from everybody are very touching. I just wanted to sincerely thank you guys for supporting my flash. <:D
My second flash ever(after Ortus part I-III)made. Due to filesize, there is no voice overs, and there is a lot to read. It is highly recommended to see Ortus part I-III to get more out of the story. Enjoy.
Music by Edgen(Betrayal), and Clash and Promise from Wild Arms OST.
Amazing and beyond words
Your improvement has been amazing, I like how the story's moving along and can't wait to see more of this, keep at it I have great faith in your ability, I know this story is going to be even better from now on, keep working hard, your art is truly inspiring.
Lovely dark story~
You really stayed "true to your dark side" on this one. ;D bica1. Good story, I enjoyed it, and how you are experimenting with flash created an interesting style and appeal. ^^
Judgement
I miss the voice acting you did in the otehr ortus submissions in this, I do think it does add to the flash.
I like the stlye of your flashes. You have some good moving works.
I like the contrast you use for somethings to be in all color then others in black and white. Or just a small part in black and white.
It really does add to the meanings of things. The music you choose works well with the flash.
Yeah, the filesize was a big concern, and sadly I couldn't put it in...but luckily for the next one, I will be able to put voices, so I think I will.
Thank you for telling me what I needed to work on, and what you thought I did well. It is really much apreciated.
i dont know what to say except that it was awesome
this is the most moving flash that i have ever seen. i mean i was amazed at the reality of it
thank you very much....
wow....
I dont know what to say... it was really well done.
thank you <:D
