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by: Edgen
Submitted: 01/26/2006 | 06:36PM EST
File Info: Movie | 5 MB | Add Movie to Favorites
Current Score: 3.76 / 5.00
558 votes | 5,332 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by bica1: — Choose below… — Ortus (part I) Ortus(Part II) Ortus(part III)
UPDATE- 5th place!! That is awesome! The responses that I'm getting from everybody are very touching. I just wanted to sincerely thank you guys for supporting my flash. <:D
My second flash ever(after Ortus part I-III)made. Due to filesize, there is no voice overs, and there is a lot to read. It is highly recommended to see Ortus part I-III to get more out of the story. Enjoy. Music by Edgen(Betrayal), and Clash and Promise from Wild Arms OST.
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Average Score: 8.8 / 10
"Lovely dark story~"
You really stayed "true to your dark side" on this one. ;D bica1. Good story, I enjoyed it, and how you are experimenting with flash created an interesting style and appeal. ^^
"Judgement"
I miss the voice acting you did in the otehr ortus submissions in this, I do think it does add to the flash. I like the stlye of your flashes. You have some good moving works. I like the contrast you use for somethings to be in all color then others in black and white. Or just a small part in black and white. It really does add to the meanings of things. The music you choose works well with the flash.
Yeah, the filesize was a big concern, and sadly I couldn't put it in...but luckily for the next one, I will be able to put voices, so I think I will.
Thank you for telling me what I needed to work on, and what you thought I did well. It is really much apreciated.
"i dont know what to say except that it was awesome"
this is the most moving flash that i have ever seen. i mean i was amazed at the reality of it
thank you very much....
"wow...."
I dont know what to say... it was really well done.
thank you <:D
"Good work!"
Very interessting style and a very lovely story...but the text changes too fast....but that te only critical point. all in all it was very impressive!
