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Jan 19, 2006 | 10:35 PM EST

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Author Comments

I have to say Im still some what of a new bee at this... I think this is one of my better submittions. If you know my other stuff this is a great improvement... Yet its pretty random! OK Very random... Please tell me what you think! I need imput on how to improve! This took me a very long time and I hope you enjoy it! Thanks Again -Ashy

Reviews


Knave68Knave68

Rated 5 / 5 stars

whhhoooooaaaaa

Whoa...I was totally feeling like I was on some neat-o hallucinogen drug. All I can say about this flash can be summed up in one word : Grrrroooooooovvvvyyy


cheshirecat1582 responds:

groovy was what i was going for... lol Thanks so much for the great review!!!!


BoMToonsBoMToons

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good start

I think you've got some talent to work with (especially if the kitten on the loader was drawn by you). Some of the scenes seemed pretty well thought out, others looked kind of hastily done. Specifically, I liked the shooting star over the city (the reflection detail shows you thought it through a bit), I didn't like the lizard's tongue hitting the fly (seemed like the animation was rushed through).

Overall, I think, if you spend some time on making each scene your best, you could really produce something great.



Renegade-HamsterRenegade-Hamster

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

So incredibly girly! AHHH!

Once I got over that, this is pretty nice to look at. Good colours and movement. You've improved since that "No Phone" one. That one was good, but this is a bit more complex. I can see the influence of the Big Fat Tutorial in those faeries.

One problem I could see was with the fish tail. In the moveclip of the squiggle, it freezes for just a small moment when it gets to the end and starts over. That could be rectified by deleting the last frame of the movieclip so that it runs smoothly, otherwise the beginning frame and the end frame are the same, causing a slight pause in the movieclip. You've done that to the rotating movieclips already (cog wheels and such), so I think you know what I'm talking about.

Good luck with future submissions.

3/5



G-Fresh717G-Fresh717

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

Very graphic design-like. Nice style and overall a nice piece of animation. My only advice would be to start using original music because there's so many issues in using copywrited materials if you ever want to go professional with it or freelance. Good job.


cheshirecat1582 responds:

Wow Thanks... I dont think im good enough to go professional but yeah your right I should use original music... but hey thanks for a great review!!! It truely helps!!


Roger-wilcoRoger-wilco

Rated 4 / 5 stars

well made

I think my eyes are bleeding... excessive cuteness.

Well made though, you are very talented. It was artistic and well designed, had style... just too cute for my blood.

Keep it up!


cheshirecat1582 responds:

Lol Thanks! Yeah its a bit girly but hey im a girl.. hehe anyways yeah thanks for an awsome review!!