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Jan 18, 2006 | 11:22 PM EST
  • Daily 3rd Place January 20, 2006

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Hello there! If you are reading this then you must be looking at my very first submission to Newgrounds! I was kinda worried about submitting to newgrounds because I see so many talented animators here, and well, I'm not that well known outside of my group of friends. So, I guess I'm here posting this in hopes to get more people out there to know who I am! This was a project for one of my animating classes and is my first true finished animation. I can still see some rough spots but it is finished... (Just the eye of more experience looking back).

Well, this animation is of my series Dragon Angel:Beta (not very original.x.x) And the male character is Anthony Ryn and the female one (the one with the hood and scars) is Naomi Axen. I have another animation on the way and it is being shown in rough stages on my deviantart account, can you guess the name? Alamus. (pats you on the head). So if you like what you see here my deviantart gallery www.alamus.deviantart.co
m has more pieces of art featuring these characters and more. So.. um... yeah. I hope this commentary was enjoyable. or something...

UPDATE* Oh my god... I didn't expect so many views! Thank you all who commented, and I got what you all were saying. This piece was just a venture into how good I can make something in flash look, hence the shortness.

But don't worry, I am currently on a new project with the action everyone wanted to see, and with the response I got I really wanna rock it out. Thank you all for giving me a good reason to push myself harder.

Reviews


im-not-a-doctorim-not-a-doctor

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow

this animation is so well done! it must have taken so long to do just the way everything flowsand it looks not done by flash. omg this was good!


Alamus responds:

hehe thanks! this took me a while to do since I didn't have the tablet unlike with my newer flash animation. But I would still like to tie it in with my up comming animation, so hopefully I will somehow tie it all together. :D


ColdReaverColdReaver

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Beautiful..

That was an amazing flash, everything about it was great. possibly it's only down-side is its length, but otherwise im still giving you a full score

5/5

-famitsu



LinkSilvermaneLinkSilvermane

Rated 5 / 5 stars

well

I simply HAVE to give you a 10 for your excellent graphic skills and good sense of music.

I didn't get the story, though. She's a psychotic assasin, I'm guessing...

have you made any other flashes where it shows HOW she kills?


Alamus responds:

Yeah, the story is kinda vague. But here it is.

The guy doing all the walking is Anthony Ryn, a being not of this world who is being pursued by a race known as the Krellion (which he is half of.) Anthony is not alone, however, for others of his race are hiding in clusters all around Earth. The "psychotic assasin" is one of them.

She is Naomi Axen, the latest decendant of the Axen clan. Her duty (since their whole race was destroyed in fullout war) is to protect the remaining Draconian (that's what Axen is) from the Krellion who wish to put them into breeding programs.

So basically, a Krellion was following Anthony on the roof tops, but was killed cause Axen got to him first. The Krellion was killed by Axen, hence the whole "And dropped him...with a smile."

Ta-DA! STORY! PLOT! CONFUSING AS ALL HELL I KNOW! >D


AtalayaAtalaya

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Incredible

The story behind this flash is magnificent. I sense it would make for a beautiful continued storyline.

I absolutely loved the VAST song too. They're one of my favorite bands.

This was a stunning submission, and I really think an elaboration would be well admired.


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VaughtVaught

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I bow before you flash mightiness!

One HELL of a flash! I know for a fact you'll make it far in NG. I hope to see you make more! If this one isnt complete, please, PLEASE, complete! I love it! ><!