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Well Its too old to have a comment.
You really need to improve on the graphics and such.
Thats coming from some homosexual yu gi oh bummer with the worst ever flash skill i have seen...
Good lip sinkin dude.
Can you say...nothin close to JoeCartoon.
nothin close to JoeCartoon. There! ;o
its okay i guess
though i think you can do a little better. but good job anyway!
"though i think you can do a little better" - i agree, thanks for the review man
I didn't know I was supportting a terrorist. Wait I supported a hippy too. I think you can make some improvements.
I liked the humor you used in this. I think you show good promise.
Work on the background some mroe too.
Thanks for the review, was my first ever flash, got through first time submitting i was lucky i suppose
This is not exactly what i would call a good toon. I did like the graphics somewhat, though, even if you just drew it from another picture. It had darker outlines with a bit brighter fillings, so i'll give you a few extra points there. But otherwise there was really nothing to hang in the christmas tree. It was mostly tweens, except for the ''black'' guy, whose voice was taken from some tv/radio show, whose mouth moved between two frames.
The sound quality was O.K, but since you just got it from another person, there was very little effort put into it, especially since there was no lip-syncing at all. And we all get that the person who talked was black, so why couldn't you have made him black? Couldn't find a picture that was suitable enough? Bah.
And making the object he was talking about just appear in the way it did, was not funny. It didn't contribute to anything, except a few additional points to the effort bar, since you drew more than two things.
You need to practice some more on your drawing abillities, and start making characters of your own. And do try harder on the lyp-syncing next time. As it is now, won't do.
Hey i Made the guy white and the black guy talk so its kind of anti racist since it dosnt matter so if i had a mix of a black mans voice and white man animation then i could see it as not white power or racist!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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