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i hope you rate this good! please leave lots of reviews for me so i can read and reply to all of them!
A Wonderful submission of enlightenment!
Great job, & though I did not rate your artwork high I understand that you were doing this for artist such as myself. Basically a newbie in flash. You've readily made a simple yet highly effective tutorial, that does not drag on for hours.
heh, you should see what i have in store for my next tut!
I thought this was very helpful. It could be tweeked a little but I'm sure that you are fixing everything you can. I can't wait to see the finished product. You are really putting a lot of time into this. This is really cool!
thanks, you know that is a really good review, im gonna mark that "helpful" heh thanks for the wonderful review!
It could be better.
For people like me, who are learning actionscripting and stuff, these kinds of tutorials are lifesavers. But I think yours can be lots better. Try to make sure that your animated flash window looks as realistic as it can get unless you want to use screencaps, which is also cool. And it would help lots if you had a back button as well, little features like that make all the difference. And the thing that bugged me the most is you need to explain WHY you're doing something, because people don't want to just copy and paste things from your tutorial, they want to actually learn them for themselves. For example, you said "In this frame, but the "stop()" command in the actions window". Something better would be like "You need to enter the "stop()" command in the actions window so this this and this will happen, and something like this won't happen". Haha, but make sure you'll put what'll actually happen, and not just "this". Anyways, good work man, I'll keep an eye out for your other stuff.
thanks, on every frame of the big ferrety tutorial, (my next one) there are two arrows, apart from the intro and pre-laoder
it's nicely done.
kkeep up the good work.
Finally good to see a tutorial like this. Good job.
you think this is goodd, wait `till my next tut comes out, you can learn how to make 6 diff styles of games and it has over 90+ topics on flash!
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