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I made this in 1 day and it's my 5th ever flash movie. I'm not ANY good with sound and animation, but I do concentrate quite a lot on the graphics.
Kerpal teachs Boy and Girl the wonders of the ball in the wilderness amongst the mountains and such. I have to say that I was impressed with the background, it was very simple yet effective. The detail for the characters though was a little unrefined, yet simple - so it is ok. A small amount of effects go a long way and you seem to have it down pat. I was not a big fan of the over racist/ethnic voice, I know Kerpal was invented by The Jerky Boys, so some credit should be acredited towards them, even though this is not exactly like their character.
that was pathetic. I have no idea how this survived on the portal. I submit stuff better than that and they get blammed.
put some thought into it...
Graphics: Very well drawn. You have a very appealing drawing style. Animates good too.
Style: It just plays on the Hindu jokes. That died out a couple years back.
Sound: The sound was poorly setup. You really shouldn't base a Flash on just one set of sound alone.
Violence: The guy getting hit with the ball and the end is nicely done. Nothing excessive, which is good.
Interactivity: You really nead a replay button and load screen for those with super slow PCs. Not all PCs will show the graphics immediately.
Humor: Like said, the Hundu jokes are not funny.
Overall: You have lots of talent, but you really nead to consider the material of your work. You need to work on what is the basis of your work.
really good, i loved it. the graphics were great and it was really funny.stop the background noise on the microphone, or just leave it on all the way through because the way the background noise stopped and started made it unrealistic. it was an amazing animation though.
you have high potetional in flash work
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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