USERNAME:
PASSWORD:
Save Info!
Logging in…
Contact | Add Artist to Favorites
01/06/2006 | 02:05AM EST
Movie | 761.7 KB
Add Movie to Favorites
3.08 / 5.00
Score Rank: #52,721 Popularity Rank: #47,327
360 votes | 2,952 views
Voting is enabled after Movie loads
Click an icon to vote on this!
Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
You are not logged in.
If you log in to vote, you could win $100!
Submissions by OxSox: — Choose below… — A Dragon's Revenge Dragon's Revenge Pencil Rain The Fairy Future Mother Unmarked Helicopters When I'm Running Zoom Out
This is my second submission and I'd like to think it's improved drastically from my first. I've learned a lot in making this movie, but I can always learn more so please leave a rating with constructive criticisms. I’ll try to read and respond to all. Enjoy!
It should also be noted that the sleeping wolf is the protagonist wolf's puppy not the wolf itself, notice the different coloring, size, and the song lyrics.
Enter your summary, rating, and review for: Will the Wolf Survive?
No HTML, please. Characters remaining: 4,096.
If you are giving this submission a low score, please offer constructive criticism that will be useful to the artist. The review space is not a place for you to act like a total asshole. If your review is found to be mean, offensive, or generally not helpful, you will be banned and your account may be terminated. NOTE: Any attempt to promote an outside, unrelated website in this space will result in the deletion of your user account.
I have read and understood the guidelines for posting reviews to Newgrounds.
Spread the word about: Will the Wolf Survive?
Average Score: 6.1 / 10
"Its quite good."
The art is OK, The wolf looks OK, so does the humter-better than the trees. The animation is OK. the wolf walking is good, but a wolf running is quite different. If you got that as well it would look SO much better. When it goes up the hill at the end the body needs to tilt up the hill, it would look SO much better. If the hunter took a shot and you saw a slight recoil jump of the sight, then a puff of snow or chipped tree etc, it would add to the story tension.
"its nicely done but..."
the last review was rite. you need 2 work on movement...
"WORK ON MOVMENT"
I think that it would be a better movie if you could actualy make the wolf look like its walking instead of moving its legs like its skating or somthing, in short just work on the movments.
"Needs some work, but has a good start."
I agree with the person before me. What else can I say?
"That was sad :'("
That ending was sad... Other than that, I'd work on my drawing, if I were you, save the animating for later, just make sure you can draw them, though the second wolf was good. Also, when the protag. was on the mountain, you probly should've had him sit and howl, instead of standing. It's a sadder pose, in my opinion.