hello
hey there remember me from lock legion? well anyways this was a great flash work, i really really liked it. although i did not understand the plot (the story line). it was great,
keep up the good work!
~liljackasslock
Author Comments
I had to do this for a school project, Multimedia class specifically. Since it is considered gold compared to the rest of the students projects, I didn't have to put a whole lot of effort into it. Blame if you wish, but please leave comments as to why you blamed it. And remember, Wade will eat you if you group blame me xD
Limon responds:
I remember seeing your name somewhere, but I don't know you too well. Thanks for the review. I showed it to my class today, it has been decided to be an "expirimental" film.
Not Bad...
Can't say I'm a fan of these clock crew or lock legion movies but I give them a chance. The computer voice is really starting to get on my nerves though. I liked the idea for your movie, but I think it could have been executed better. While making it you should have thought to yourself, "would I understand this movie if I hadn't read the Raven
?" I have read the Raven and I really enjoyed it, but your movie doesn't really make sense unless you know the story. The graphics need a bit of work and you need more sound effects and maybe a longer sound loop for the song. Nice work though.
Limon responds:
Well since my target audience knows the story, I didn't try to retell the story, just give my interpretation. And yes, I'm one of those lock's who prefers to do voice acting, however my microphone decided to quit on me today. I kept Speakonia to a minimal.
Not bad.
I can see you tried to get the mood of the story right, and you came close. It should be longer and needs a creepy soundtrack. If you can get the raven to say "Never more!" in a cool way that would help alot. Have a nice day!
Limon responds:
Thanks for the comments. You also should have a nice day.
lol! reminded me of an episode from the simpsons!
great no wonder u beat the other pupuls i have faith this will survive jugdement it was well cool i gave it a 5
p.s check out mi voting power add it together times bi 3! lol this rocked best entri i have seen all day!
Limon responds:
Interesting, I didn't think about the simpsons once during the making of this. I see you gave sound a 10. Interesting as I felt sound was the worst part.
Lol
You should work on your drawings, as I saw the bird and door were pretty crap, but the zoomy out elements and way the lock fell on the floor were nicely done. You certainly got potential.
Limon responds:
Actually the bird and door were from a few months ago when I started this. My favorite graphic was Peach, he just looks so cute xD
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