llol

funny

Better still.

I saw your last dress-ups and I see you are getting better and better.
I liked the overall style, the fact that you had a male and fem model and the variable skins including the zombie one. The intro matrix reference was funny and quite unexpectable, I liked it a lot. The first "relaxing" music was Ok, the second one sucked, but it may be just my opinion.
If I have to say what should be improved I say: Body models first. These ones are a bit blocky and a tad unrealistic, some clothes do not fit right too. Next time mayby add some more stuff and variable backgrounds.
In the end the most important thing is that you are making progress with Flash and drawing and I hope you are having a good time with it. Thumbs up to ya!

A fair effort, but needs a major overhaul

The graphics here can't compete with the other Dress-ups on the site. The character models don't look as human as they should, and some of the clothes don't even look like they fit the characters right. To your credit, it's good to see that you have a male as well as a female character model, not many Dress-ups have the audacity to have a male Dress-up Doll available.

The music is alright, but nothing special - you can always mute it. I thought the range of clothes was fair, though there wasn't as much variety as there could have been.

All in all, this was only an average Dress-up. In no ways is it a doomed effort, but it doesn't particularly do much to keep people playing long enough.

Can better

A nice dress-up. I liked the thing that you can choose between a male and a female. The dress-up doll you drawed, it can be better.
The sound is good, I liked that the most of this flash.

This may help you for next time

Ok that was great with all the different selecions of clothing and accesories but he pictures had no taste in it mayb you could go on the internet and search how to draw manga or something or mayb you could learn from newgrounds in the tutorials! good try though from chris :)