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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
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This needs improvement...
Here are some suggestions:
1. Don't make Ness so big.
2. For the text box, it looks like a Paint JPEG (and probably is) so you might wanna get Photoshop to fix that...
3. Might want to make it a bit longer and much funnier.
Other than that, EarthBound rocks! And... that's all. Hope my suggestions help. ;)
"2. For the text box, it looks like a Paint JPEG (and probably is) so you might wanna get Photoshop to fix that..."
You've got a sharp eye ;)
Not that great. Sort of choppy. Just... Not that great.
PS: You know it's illegal to use Ninteno's sprites?
I'd like to see Nintendo do something about it.
......almost made me laugh, but work on that
that? can you be any more vague?
high for any nintendo characters. especially classics. the animation, to be honest, wasnt that good. that hand drawn circle threw me off. but it had ness in it, so i had no choice to vote high. consider yourself lucky.
Yeah, after making this I figured that having ness in it would raise the score a bunch. Thanks for the vote
Well, I like that you're using sprites. I love sprites. Ok, You should consider making Ness a bit smaller, or the houses bigger.
The plot was ok for starters. Now, you should expand more.
I'm sorry if this might get blammed. it was a funny short for me. Just keep practicing Sprites.
thanks for the pointers
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