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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
**I respond to all reviews**
An alright sprite animation
The backgrounds looked nice and detailed and as Ness walked it kinda looked realistic, err as realistic as it's can ever get.
The storyline seemed to be a little lacking though, like it seemed things were happening for no reason and without adding to the story.
The one part I got a little chuckle from was where the monty python foot 'pancaked' Ness, it was pretty funny but other then that it was a little dull. I have never played any of Ness's games (other then SSB) so maybe it was a bit of a parody but I dunno.
Overall I thought it was an ok flash but with maybe a little more time planning ahead of time I think this could be much better.
Thanks for the review. I'll admit this could use some work, and at the end I kind of lost interest in making this movie so that is why I just ended it so abrubtly.
This is a pretty average sprite movie, it really had nothing too special. Firstly, let me mention that the animation itself was pretty good for a sprite movie. The only thing about the animation that bothered me is that after he fell, the black screen got closed in a weird way. Secondly, the style was also pretty nice, the atmosphere was pretty humorous. But the thing is that nothing actually happened in there, so the style didn't donate a bit. Thirdly, the script was pretty bad, because it wasn't that funny and there wasn't an actual story behind this. Nothing else happened but Ness going to the arcade, and it wasn't rvery humorous as well. Anyway, it is an average movie, nothing too special, but it wasn't bad either. Next time put some more efforts.
I really did put a lot of work into this movie...the truth is that I am terrible at anything to do with graphics, which is why some parts looked weird/low quality. I kind of did this on a whim, and I don't really plan on making anything like this in the future. Thanks for the reivew.
i liked ittt!!!!
it was cool!!
really complex backgrounds and the Ness character was good. Pretty good on graphics for a sprite movie. I liked the sub-titles and they moved at a perfect pace for me.
The game music went along well with the movie.
The giant foot squishing Ness at the end was just the right amount of violence. It made me laff.
The interactivity was ok, you might add where you got your sprites in the ending credits.
Overall, I liked the movie. I hope you keep trying. I'll be looking for more stuff from you :)
thanks, atleast someone appreciates my work
I wasn't too keen on it, not much happened.
At first I was a little dissappointed as to how Ness was too big compared to his surroundings, but I didn't let that one bother me too much. What I was a little disappointed about though was the lack of story, when Ness entered the arcade, it led me to believe that some full-blown story was coming, but instead it was just a 5-second little incident and then it was all over, perhaps you could have had some little adventure story happening instead of just suddenly ending it.
Lots Of Love, Rebecca Rose
I'm not good at movies, thats why it ended like that, thanks for reviewing all my stuff
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