Ness Goes to the Arcade

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Ness Goes to the Arcade

Lights Launch Popup Stretch Movie Expand Collapse

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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.

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BlueToken

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 30, 2005

-.-

this is the kind of stuff that makes people hate Sprite Movies.

FattyWhale responds:

yay

cyberpants

Rated 1 / 5 stars December 30, 2005

Well...

It's okay. It passes the Blam test, but just barely. Here are my notes:

1) Either make the background bigger, or make Ness smaller, because he's way too big.
2) That's not Ness' house, that's Pokey's house. Ness lives in the other house.
3) Cliff scene was funny, keep it just the way it is.
4) Make the text scroll faster than people read, because it takes too long.
5) Clean up your spelling and grammar. If you have to use 1337 speak, only use it in one place.
6) That "a while later" thing was crap, because it was obvious that you didn't know how to get him to the arcade fast. Try a quick fade out/fade in, without text, instead.
7) Even if it's really dark, show a really dark arcade background.
8) Wtf.. foot? Hilarious. End the movie right after Ness gets squashed. It's funnier if he doesn't say anything at all.

FattyWhale responds:

thanks for the review and for the pointers. Really appreciated

neoalien12

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 30, 2005

i liked it

pretty funnyy but your ness sprite was too big. that was really funny though because even though the sprite was too big he actually climbed down the mountain. i voted "5"!