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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
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......almost made me laugh, but work on that
that? can you be any more vague?
high for any nintendo characters. especially classics. the animation, to be honest, wasnt that good. that hand drawn circle threw me off. but it had ness in it, so i had no choice to vote high. consider yourself lucky.
Yeah, after making this I figured that having ness in it would raise the score a bunch. Thanks for the vote
Well, I like that you're using sprites. I love sprites. Ok, You should consider making Ness a bit smaller, or the houses bigger.
The plot was ok for starters. Now, you should expand more.
I'm sorry if this might get blammed. it was a funny short for me. Just keep practicing Sprites.
thanks for the pointers
Not a bad start
I liked your idea of using ness for a flash- you did well with the background images, and the music- though low quality- was accurate for the scene.
The problem was your lack of plot =P Ness wants to go to the arcade.. falls, passes out, and... is squashed by a giant foot.... WTF?
You need to make an actual plot, with other characters for ness to interact with, and make the flash longer.
Not a bad idea, but you need to actually take it somewhere next time.
Yeah, my mind was kind of running when I made this.
this is the kind of stuff that makes people hate Sprite Movies.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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