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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
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Subpar Sprite Submission
While I enjoyed the movie, there are several quality problems that keep me from rating it much higher; however, the majority of these should be easy to fix.
First of all, the sprites were completely mismatched in size. Why was Ness two stories tall and as wide as a tree?
The text displayed with a very low quality and was very grainy. In addition, it displayed far too slowly.
Finally, the submission was far too short and lacked any real plot. I get the joke but you could have done so much more with this.
All in all, the fixes should be easy to implement and I am hopefully that you attempt to make another Earthbound submission in the future with more accurate sized sprites and crisper text.
Alas, of course everyone could do more, I suppose. But then every submission would be perfect.
It had promise, I'll give you that
i've seen better, try more characters and a longer story.
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