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this is my first animation i hope you enjoy it. if not i still have time to learn to do better either way. It is my little story that is weird and different from many.
Heh heh heh..
That was entertaining for the short while it lasted, keep it up, youv got lots of potential ;)
Oh and thanx for using my music :P
thanks. i'm glad u didn't mind me using to music. i would have asked spect i was short on time. school projects have deadlines lol.
it was pretty good for a first animation, though a little bit late for halloween i think. overall, it was cool, had nice drawings, good audio and it was fun to watch. i would suggest browsing a couple tutorials though to help you get better, you have some pretty good potential in making flash, so use them to maximize it.
thank you, but who said that it had be halloween for pumpkins. and thanks again. just remember it was a school project
I like turtles.
You have a truly great style. The graphics were really pretty, but you're lacking in the animation area. Thought there were a little too many vines in the beginning too. The sound went really well with the visual part. Next time though, make the story more interesting. I think by making the pumpkin walk a little further and eat more things (and a little more clearer, now it was a little: animal-pumpkin walks to animal-animal gone) before it gets eaten by the turtle would have already been a nice improvement. Or let the pumpkin attempt to eat the turtle first.
2 main things
there are two main things that need improvement:
1.) your animation was choppy. the art was good, but poor animation completely ruins that.
2.) the overall idea was kinda dumb. i mean, an evil pumpkin eats things and then a giant turtle eats him? im all for randomness but that was just plain stupid.
this reminds me of gargoyles quest on the origional game boy.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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