Eulogy For: Cliff Battle
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
12/28/05 – 11/29/09
The Idea seems a bit cliche'd but Its my first attempt to make an animation I think i pulled it off well (this isnt going to be continued as i have no idea whats going to happen D: )
It was good for a first try anyway, but it will be blammed im afraid.
stick figures always get blammed unless its done as humor and really really good.
sorry but i have to say blam
i liked the sounds and the humor of it though
I kinda like the sketchy feel of the close up drawings.
dont scribble though, the blue attack thing? sorry, no.
the backflipping stick guy? make it close up and it'll look much better.
the story was... well.. absent.
I can see a pretty good flash somewhere in this, honestly.
just use the same style all the time, lose the 'stick' feel and go with the filled-in style.
it was good and i would like to see more from you
I'm giving you a 1/5 purely because I want to see this done again, but with more animation on the body and head.
All good otherwise, music ruled, what was it?
Some realy good graphics (skechy)
And everything else was alright
I say that was a good flash for your first submission to newgrounds.
:-)
The graphics need a just a little more fine tuning and maybe shorten a few movements and you got a nice flash style and animation
good enough to save. =)
I see alot of where I started with flash in your movie.
hey thats was cool but try to stay true to the title
Off to a good start especially as this is your first submission. Keep doing what your doing but make it a a bit better a.k.a graphics and story
