Score: 7
"Hilarious!"
date: January 5, 2006
But it needs better graphics and animation - that's the only thing holding me back from giving it a higher score. That, and you stealing the "Seinfeld" bloop-thing after you made a joke - it would've been far better if you'd found something else, because it sticks out like a sore thumb for being unoriginal. I loved this part, though:
"Yeah, I did wonder what all this mess was."
"And now you know."
"...yes, I do."
The humour reminds me of Sheriff Benson #3 - I'm basically going through the December 2005 entries to decide what to vote for (I'm part of the NG Jury this month - woohoo!) so I saw them pretty much right after one another. Anyway, this does look like something I might vote for (though not at the top of the list) - I really do like the humour. Then again, I've got still something like a hundred left to watch. :P
Author's Response:
That whole bloop thing was supposed to be a nod to Seinfeld...I have a friend who plays bass and he did the cool slap bit. I just forgot to credit him, I guess that's why you thought I'd stolen it.
Glad you liked it all the same. And if you vote for me, I'll write you into my will ;)