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I made this real quick, MERRY CHRISTMAS NG!
it would score a lot higher when the details were better, good luck and happy hollidays
Not too great, sorry
The graphics to be honest were poor. They didn't move as fluidly as other animations, and looked dull. The story was interesting to say the least, but the interactivity in opening the presents was well thought of and added some mixture to the animation. I think you should've had more colour in your animation (unless this was intentional) you should've made it run more consistanly and you should've had some audio included. I know you rushed it, but that's what gave you a lower score. Nice try.
nice xmas card
thats the spirit of the xmas!!!!
u have to work more of the graphics, subtitles and sounds.... :D
Nice holiday Spirit...
Nice spirit, but ...
The text stayed there too long
Graphics could be better
Whole movie just seemed too slow
Needed some sound, Christmas music or bells loop or something.
You could improve this
At first I wondered why there was no sound, but then seeing the beginning was black and white I thought it could have been a silent film. Ok there are subtitles instead of intertitles, but there isn't a complete requirment for them in a silent film adaptation for today, especially in flash. Still, the subtitles that were there stayed there for too long I found. I read them and waited for what seemed ages to see what it would say next. I think you should decrease the time they are there by a little. Also whether this is a silent film or not, put some sort of music in as it would help.
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