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better than your first flash
yes it was.
the flash itself got a little bit repeditive near the end and the music playing has been overused in flash movies let alone it being the theme tune for a mainstreme horror film. The graphics were okay for what it was although plenty of deatils could have been added. For the second part here are some recomendations from me
1. music that hasnt been used much or hasnt been used at all.
2. more details in to each frame
3. more emotions
i liked it a bit... kinda cool how it's like an old no sound black and white film type thing... though i don't kno what's going on... lol. but as you said that's what it was designed for. look forward to seeing the nex tone..
not to bash or anything but try to improve kinda on the animation smoothness. like put a bit more effort iinto movemnet. unless the way you have it is what you were going for.
you dont even know who the person is, what they look like, or what theyre doing. you cant tell where they are either.
as i said... it will keep u geussing till the next one...
Not the greatest, but it was pretty nice
Well I loved the song, thought it was cool. But the writing was rather poor. It seemed to be the same thing over and over. The animation style was kind of cool. I liked the moving lines and whatnot. Just work on the writing and it could get an 8 or a 9 from me.
The writing was kind of lame. Some of it kind of didn't make since. I can't exactly explain it. It looked exactly like a 13/14 year old wrote the script. Which you are. 14 years old I mean. Kind of work on the script a bit more, ask your english teacher or something if you think you should. On to the animation itself. You could tell almost the whole movie was just looping, so it couldnt have taken TOO much effort. I'm not saying you didn't work hard on it, or that its bad. Im just saying its noticable, and kind of detracts from watching it. And like others have said (well the one review I was able to see at this point, since its under judgement) was that the quality thing was in the way of the text. Hmmmm, I can't really think of anything else for now. But good job. A for effort, lol. Oh, and I also liked the style that you did it in. With all the lines and everything. Even though you looped that, I know that that at least must have taken effort. Welp, I think thats it.
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