opening credits and intro scene to whittletonbank series - meemo
nice use of sound
and the art wasn't half bad, but that's pretty much it. little to no animation.
next time, try actually animating. fbf is always good for style, u have good character designs (ie, detailed) so simplify them a bit and try fbfing with the ever-so-lovely onion skin feature of flash.
keep at it.
meh
well, despite it was just an intro, there really should've been more to this animation. i realize that it was an intro to your series or whatever, but there was really nothing much to this animation. a bit more detail to the plot would've made this one better.
right ok i'l be more specific...this is just an intro..to the first cartoon ive ever made in flash. Its not the best quality becuase im still very new to it! but thanks for all of the comments anyway!
Needs more effort into it
Well that was not funny at all. No plot or any story. Just some vamp turns up and gets hit by car. Thats's just stupid =)
lol its only an intro
so
let see his phone ring,anwer it then get run over a car,that pretty much it folks,not really original you didnt really put alot of new idea into it,you just figure i make a avg. looking flash with a easy story to it and it will get save,if you really put a effort into i bet you could of made a much better flash then that...
lol like i said before im still learnin and it is only my 2nd attempt at a flashtoon..hopefully it will be much better when its finished but its just a taster of whats to come for now. thanks - meemo
short...
Im unsure what really happened... Meemo calling? What? It was short, too short to really understand much. Maybe if you worked on it more, it would make sense.